Planet X... in grade 4
12 February 2009
This is a story I wrote in about grade four. I don't think I took it very seriously. Our teacher was Miss Ross. She was a bit older. My brother stuffed gum nuts up the exhaust pipe of her car. I didn't like her. Anyway I digress... on with the story.
It was a windy day on the Planet X. Zinca who had big teeth was on duty to make sure nobody went to the castle. There was a visitor on Planet x who didn't know anything about the planet. he walked up to the house and opened the door. Immediately he was pulled to the ground and killed.
By Michael J
This is obviously the arty illustration to go with the story.
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love the illustration
that's a good story
I've read it several times, trying to unlock its mysteries.
Lol. It's deep stuff. Watch out your brain might explode.
That is a ripper of a story. Clearly the visitor didn't have a clue.
Yeah, that's not bad..
I think there's more to this story than meets the eye. In the second book in the series, I predict there will be a twist. My guess is that Zinca is a double agent and the visitor isn't really dead...