Planet X... in grade 4

This is a story I wrote in about grade four. I don't think I took it very seriously. Our teacher was Miss Ross. She was a bit older. My brother stuffed gum nuts up the exhaust pipe of her car. I didn't like her. Anyway I digress... on with the story.

It was a windy day on the Planet X. Zinca who had big teeth was on duty to make sure nobody went to the castle. There was a visitor on Planet x who didn't know anything about the planet. he walked up to the house and opened the door. Immediately he was pulled to the ground and killed.
By Michael J
This is obviously the arty illustration to go with the story.

 

7 comments:

Astrid said... 2/12/2009 2:59 pm  

love the illustration

Anthony Rochester said... 2/12/2009 3:54 pm  

that's a good story

Cabernet Leather said... 2/12/2009 10:32 pm  

I've read it several times, trying to unlock its mysteries.

mike said... 2/12/2009 10:39 pm  

Lol. It's deep stuff. Watch out your brain might explode.

Jonny said... 2/12/2009 11:23 pm  

That is a ripper of a story. Clearly the visitor didn't have a clue.

Renae said... 2/13/2009 6:05 pm  

Yeah, that's not bad..

Suomy Nona said... 3/04/2009 3:29 pm  

I think there's more to this story than meets the eye. In the second book in the series, I predict there will be a twist. My guess is that Zinca is a double agent and the visitor isn't really dead...

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